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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 6:59:00 AM

    Hello Beautiful Mystic, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 9:30:00 PM

    I'm glad to see your beauty featured this week Rose..and love your new pic...I played around with this silly tablet and tried to take a new pic of myself today...:-)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 8/9/2013 9:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Only half of me would fit..I'm such a computer genius.. haha
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:40:00 AM

    sad and lovely Vienna congrats on being featured shadow smiles

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 12:42:00 AM

    Many congratulations Flower xx

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 3:53:00 PM

    Thank You for entering my contest

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 7:57:00 AM

    This is a particularly touching piece. I felt like I was in your home. I also love the defiance of keeping that door knob. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 1:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem Rose!!

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 8:38:00 PM

    So sad but so well done Congratulations on your win! Laura

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 7:47:00 PM

    I knew this was a winner when I first read it. Seems the contest judge knew that, as well. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Oh wow.......this is a wonderful, poignant entry to the contest! I see this winner on top of the list !!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:10:00 AM

    I am so glad i read this, you are an excellent storyteller, what an image left by a door knob, brings black and white tones shown.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:45:00 AM

    Touching poetic piece of your soul.... xxx Michael

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 10:06:00 PM

    This is a great write, Rose, I got the whole sadness picture, and the images were deep...well done Peter

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:26:00 PM

    Wow... what a vision of loss in so many ways. Amazing way to express the harshness of the circumstances. Very well done :)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 7:52:00 PM

    Such a beautifully tender and sad write....special sweet memories flow through this well written, amazing poem,,,, thanks for sharing mystic,,,,,loved it!!! Cherie...

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:48:00 PM

    Sad, but beautiful. Paints a nice picture of a story gone bad. Sometimes, in the end, all we are left with are doorknobs and memories. Nicely done MR. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:15:00 PM

    It's yours dear it's yours .lol:)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Rose this has everything! Sad, love, funny..family...beauty...everything.........love it.....

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 2:37:00 PM

    you sure know how to string thoughts together to weave such immense thoughts andfeelings... home is anywhere, v.. especially if your heart dwells in it... last stanxa is a clincher.. all my love and huggs!...:)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 1:52:00 PM

    Wow, this is truly a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! I felt the emotions all through out this piece, and how it changed at each stage of life! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:50:00 PM

    ''Until he closed his eyes and sealed my heart in his Then only shoebox memories, helped recall the kiss'' I think those lines just did it for me dear Rose.It really draw me into what was to follow.Beautiful stuff from you!

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:07:00 PM

    until he closed his eye's and sealed my heart. that touched me deeply. i have been forclosed on still going through it. but my Lord keeps me strong. yes i complain. but that still small voice spoke again today. keep listening for that voice. and keep writing. nice to hear from you.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:02:00 PM

    This was something I understand very, very well back when I was a kid. That last line amused the hell out of me. Great entry!

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 11:57:00 AM

    Wonderful and from the heart. I really love this one.