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Letting you go

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Below is the poem entitled Letting you go which was written by poet Godwins Piyo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Letting you go

In the very very beginning
Our crazy crush was 
hypnotizing
Our love life deeply 
depicted true love's 
meaning
In the dark clouds coding 
codes for love raining

Your lightining love 
struck my love labels
Powerfully purifying my 
doped eyes, clearly 
turning tables
Your bounding beauty 
jailed my jaws, speechless
Perfectly proving your 
pleasant presence, 
priceless

Nevertheless nature 
truelly manifests 
measuring stability
Nothing none could 
compare to thy heart's 
cruelty
Not numerals could count 
thy hecta-million lies
Not even my 
compasionate eyes could 
confidently locate where 
beauty lies

You cleverly cheated your 
only one
You cleverly covered your 
little affairs to everyone
You severely struck a 
pure heart like a sudden 
heart attack
I was once pure at heart
But now darkly dark

Let love be considered 
gone!
My fellow folks say : "Le 
Go!"
My ex-dear dearest please 
save me
Pretty please hit the 
narrow road
Sadly LETTING YOU GO

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  1. Date: 7/28/2013 1:06:00 PM
    I just had to read another one of your poems because I was impressed by the first one I read from you.This one is just as impressive and even more.Inform me when you post so I could look forward to perusing more of your work.Loved it!

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/28/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow thanks so much ma friend!!:), sure, i will let you know, thanks again!!:)
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 8:27:00 PM
    wow, Godwins, I read this poem. one more time. WOW! I will add this alliteration to my favorite poem list. it is sad, letting go is never easy. you did a wonderful job here. enjoyed the flow... One day I will have "alliteration" contest. I hope you join when you see it... always~ SKAT

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/28/2013 1:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow so glad you enjoyed it SKAT!!:D.ofcourse i will join if i see any alliteration contest, ofcourse i will join yours.Thanks again SKAT:) thanks for putting my poem to your favorites!!
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Letting go is never easy- but you managed to write an absolutely gorgeous poem about the process! Well done! :)

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/27/2013 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne:)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Very deep thoughts penned, it is heart wrenching letting go of one you love, you describe it so vividly, thank you for sharing your heart xxx

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/27/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Pleasure dear:)