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Was I dreaming - one in three contest

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Was I dreaming - one in three contest

It's the bewitching hour
the time when dreams are created.
I am walking along a dusty path
mists  swirling about me

Something caught my eye
was a deer limping badly. 
I softly spoke to him, "don't be afraid", 
" I wont hurt you, I will help you"

Removed a large thorn from his hoof.
He nudged my face as in thanks
then walked away looking backwards
as though he was remembering

Was I dreaming am I awake
The thunder and lightening crashed  outside
Did it awaken me? Was then I noticed
a thorn and a big leaf, on my bed.


Contest:  one in three

Topic : Beyond Midnight 

Dated 27 July 2013

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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 1:32:00 AM
    Damn i messed this one up, put wrong title on it. Ahh well silly me.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:49:00 AM
    This was lovely to read Seren.I liked this one from you.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/28/2013 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mustapha ....Seren
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 10:09:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, I enjoyed it immensely...Peter

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/27/2013 11:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter,nice to see you....Seren
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:22:00 PM
    good luck yourself

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thx Richard
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 9:25:00 AM
    Incredible tone in this piece. Very, very well done!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/26/2013 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Drake, wasnt too sure of it....Seren
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:56:00 AM
    Oh I have always enjoyed this story and you have told it so excellently my friend! I really enjoyed reading this majestic write Seren, what a lovely poem that I have read this morning! What a grand piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/26/2013 2:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Russell, ant wait to read your entry...Seren
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 4:13:00 AM
    Seren so lovely and excellent flow Shadow x smiles

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/26/2013 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow ...Seren