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Beastly Beauty

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Beastly Beauty

Mean from the start, depicted by fury.
  A beast lies in you, from the belly of your torment

Sour & snarling, with each word you spill.
 Lonely is your heart, unwilling to chill.

Severely damaged goods, not my fault.
  Feel the coldness in the air, gone as you depart.

Not a sight for sore eyes, whenever you pass by.
  Even your shadow, quivers with despise.

Somehow in this lunacy, a twinkle emerges 
  From your eyes.  A gesture pass that dark, shallow
Exterior.  A interior full of light.
 
 Gaze seemed so gloomy, now seen so bright.
A roaring echo rumbles, into a sweet lullaby,
By night.
 
 Beauty lost & found, in the strangest place.
Bewildered but transformed, love has found its place.

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  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Great write Cherie, hope you get the most out of this new love...Peter

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 8/29/2013 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol peter its, a fictional write, but I could use a beastly beauty in my life right now ha ha ha:0) thanks so much 4 your sweet comment....<3cheriex
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Very creative, love always find its place, 4th couplet I like that old saying, well done , thank you for visiting my works, too, blessings sueellen

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 8/29/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks sue ellen,,,,& your welcome. yes it does, for real. Ty for your lovely comments always cherie....
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 7:21:00 AM

    Cleverly done, I also like the play on words with the title.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 8/6/2013 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Much thanks Richard...I'm all smiles:)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:37:00 PM

    This is work to be proud of.. I enjoyed the cryptic element you inserted... Love ya... Jake

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/27/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Greetings jake,,,, thankyou for your lovely comment, means alot:0) cherie..
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 2:43:00 PM

    Very creative work ..Enjoyed reading this one today..Your presence at my work was very encouraging..Sara

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/27/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello, Thankyou sara ,,,,.appreciate your kind words:)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:25:00 PM

    i don't like it i think love should be kind day and night.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/27/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi john,,, I agree with you, love should be patient & kind, all the time...but "we" live in the real world and sometimes love takes nurturing and , caring for the wounded & emotionally scared...so that it can be, in how its intended, to be...thanks for your comment appreciate your thoughts:) peace & love....cheriex
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 7:52:00 AM

    I like your 6th verse "A roaring echo rumbles, into a sweet lullaby, By night." You are very poetic and painted the image beautifully

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/26/2013 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi manel...I Really appreciate your comment ..means alot to me thankyou...hugz:) , cherie...
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:30:00 AM

    Yes! i agree with comments below! Cherie! beautiful transformation! jimbo

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/26/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi jimbo....thanks so much for stopping by. Happy to see your comment, :) ty cherie.....
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 11:58:00 PM

    Yes, now this indeed describes this kind of person. Reminds me of the Beauty and Beast story.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/26/2013 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi andrea,,, yes definitely a spin off that. Thanks so much for your comment:0) appreciate it.....cheriex
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 11:44:00 PM

    Love removes all reasoning. What a rush of images & emotions here.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/26/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It really does its so weird,,, that feeling:) right Drake lol thanks so much, for your lovely comment...cheriex
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:33:00 PM

    you've made your Mark! been reading a lot, to make a difference, with your signature touch! thank you cherry bunny.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 7:24:00 PM

    You've aced this one my friend.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/26/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love that bunny,,, very cute M:0)
    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/25/2013 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always a pleasure seeing you my dear friend M....thankyou always....bunny!!! Cherie...
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Very nice. Great flow. Kilmer

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/25/2013 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi kilmer,,,,, thanks for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated....One<3 cherie....
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:26:00 PM

    The title alone is so poetic! An outstanding poem, my dear! :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas Date: 7/25/2013 10:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne, Thanks so much for your lovely comment!!! truly appreciate,,, your kindness:0) cherie~<3