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Cupids other arrow

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Cupids other arrow

hardly other noises
so often loudest possible voices
penetrate the double-glazed window

two children are trying their best
on their heartfelt childish quest
parental shouting's  intro

will this ever end
somewhere there must be a friend
to vanish their world of shadow

your or an anonymous  call
won't cause a fall at all
but a pier for Cupid's arrow 

© Ellie Daphne

Note: 
In the Netherlands is a very moving series of TV commercials about abuse of children and adults... addressing a too often 'hidden'  problem. These commercials  inspired me to write this sonnet.

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:00:00 AM
    ED., congrats on your well deserved victory. G.

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 4:18:00 PM
    A winning entry that raises the awareness of the public... Double congrats on your win.... Jake

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Congrad's on your fine verse winning! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 12:26:00 AM
    A very good write Ellie, thanks for sharing Peter

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Lovely Ellie. An important message that's big problem in the world, hidden many times from eyes of the community. Thank you for sharing your write. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 9:21:00 AM
    Very elegant statement about the 'hidden' problem that inspired this gem, Ellie...So nice to see you posting again!...I saw that you are following me on Spotify...Hope you enjoy the music! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:03:00 PM
    Some strong imagery here! Interesting how you implemented a "family" element to this.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 1:20:00 PM
    - Skillfully written Ellie, a very good poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)