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Below is the poem entitled Go On which was written by poet Ruth Courtney. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Go On

He asked what I was going to do with my life
My thoughts ran like a wild hog from Pakastaine
I wanted to take my time pacing my answer in strife
I had already seen the world understand
Already been through college
I was no longer interested in playing with the band
Life, long and lean wisdoms hardly seen
So many stories as I am slowly growing old
Already been through Nasa and left them green
What in this world would make me happier 
My conscious already have been deemed
I took his hand and explained like a fien
I didn't know yet simple as it could be

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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:06:00 AM
    There are a couple of spelling errors on here: "College", "Conscious", etc. That said, it's kind that one would ask you what you want to become of yourself. Most can care less...this was a good, reflective piece. :)

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney
    Date: 8/14/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    corrected thank you Drake
    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney
    Date: 8/11/2013 1:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake nice to hear from you again