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Girl, Interrupted

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Girl, Interrupted

Girl, Interrupted-

 
Deep cuts from within.
She faced bravely the many hardships of womanly life. 
How did she end up here?
Severe depression after her first mental breakdown.
Sorrow oppressed what was left.
Now in the parallel universe, 
Never aware of the world left behind.
She will catch a brief glimpse of this world where everything is different.

Losing the veil in which includes time, 
Aging without caring death awaits!
Her different personality replaces reality. 
Things appear normal in her the eye. 

Although captivate in her own mind,
She feels this is freedom.

Being heavily burdened--
Every day she stares into different mirrors,
Smiling in her bipolar face.
Without knowing insanity put her mind at ease.

~SKAT~

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  1. Date: 9/23/2014 11:59:00 AM
    Excellent poetry. Just exactly what I needed this hot evening. Thanks for the share

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 10:48:00 PM
    I love the movie although i will honestly say I loved reading your poem even more. Great job! I hope to read plenty more

  1. Date: 7/3/2014 7:53:00 AM
    I just watched the movie yesterday; saw this poem in your list. You perfectly captured it, SKAT. Great job !

  1. Date: 5/29/2014 3:00:00 PM
    I don't know about the last line, what did you mean? I did like this poem though. I also loved the movie Girl interrupted. What motivated you to write this? Can I ask?

  1. Date: 5/26/2014 9:44:00 PM
    This first-rate poem delivers a heavy topic with revealing words. Nice job, SKAT! Have a good day and God bless!

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 9:42:00 PM
    SKAT This is so moving and powerful it touches the readers heart. You captured this disorder in a deeply intense way. Thank you for the great comment on my Shakespeare poem.

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 5:54:00 PM
    THANK YOU KELLY........SKAT

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 8:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem. This is very sad.

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 9:41:00 AM
    Such a somber but moving poem of depth and perception, .......depression is the enemy of so many women....often hidden with shame......but a stalking presence. This is a great poem of truth.

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 12:43:00 AM
    Very strongly written, but very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/15/2014 12:12:00 AM
    I remembered this poem, because it is already on my favorites list! I love the depth in this one. An awesome poem, SKAT! Congratulations on your win! :)

  1. Date: 3/31/2014 10:01:00 AM
    Wow. That was beautiful..

  1. Date: 3/19/2014 2:35:00 PM
    Truthfully told, masterful! (Hugs Skat!

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 7:31:00 AM
    very powerful, you did a great job recreating the emotions depression through this poem :) Kirbykirb ~

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 5:58:00 PM
    I like the use of stark words that truly describes what a person feels when they are truly depressed. It is truly an invisible burden others who do not understand will not see. I like how the mirror changes everyday while she calmly faces each days change. Very moving, but I am biased on this poem. I hope you have more like this one.

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 1:02:00 AM
    Powerful!! I could see this playing out, a dramatic, cinematic adventure!Nice!Asavvy1

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 1:01:00 PM
    Amazing ! So deep !

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 3:46:00 AM
    What an interruption, they don't get much worse. Well penned. Going straight to favs ready for tweeting.

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 2/28/2014 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I mean half my collection as a combined total :) Oh and that's the popular half, chuckle.
    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 2/28/2014 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow, I think this poem has had about as many reads as half of my collection. Here goes to adding more. Tweets away...
  1. Date: 2/16/2014 9:26:00 AM
    Ahhh . . . In a situation such as this, Skat, it is a blessing insanity has given her peace. For what is the alternative. Really.

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 6:04:00 AM
    Speaks straight to the heart, stings a little bit, but worth the release

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