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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:55:00 PM

    This is good Annie. I like it. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:00:00 PM

    enjoyed your poem tonight anne. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 4:08:00 AM

    I feel your passion. Today, 29, I still feel some ways you captured above.

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 4:36:00 AM

    Excellent. Wonderful poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:20:00 AM

    I love this! Haven't read your work for a while. This is some pretty good stuff for only being 15

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 2:36:00 PM

    - A wonderful poem from a "young girl"(only 15) - Amazingly good work!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 9:32:00 PM

    Such wisdom from a 15 year old. Well worth the read today my friend. Many blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 6:24:00 AM

    Feelings raw....nice! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:47:00 PM

    Expression and creation keeps us motivated and keeps us going. This is an amazing song. You are very talented. I see you have risen from the darkness. I suppose it is all part of growth. Still these words are great and worth reading. You were a talented 15 year old and looks at you now! Wow! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 8:50:00 PM

    I'm glad to know that this period in your life is long past. We learn so much if given time........I'm pleased to know that we grow and change, and heal! Thank God for that! ps......many thanks for my placement in your recent contest. I've been away, and just now had the chance to read the results.....I am so impressed by your winners, and glad to be among them........thank you!

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:59:00 AM

    this is amazing poetry Anne, and yes with poetry like this,, you are winning,,,

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 8:57:00 AM

    This is an excellent piece of writing anne,,, emotionally stirring. Really enjoyed reading ty4sharing:) <3 cherie

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 8:45:00 AM

    i was passing by to check if you have a new piece, anne... thanks for the honor of including me in your contest; you inspire, sweets!... love and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:29:00 PM

    ANNE!!!! Thanks ever so much for my place in your contest...How did I miss that? I was alerted by a friend to my win in Richard's contest. I thought that was the latest posting. Thanks EVER so much sweetie for giving me a place on such an amazing contest subject...I've been very close to the edge...very close. I can see from your poem, that you have felt pain deeply as well...I've posted on this before. Just wanted to thank you for the place you gave Songs of Ophelia...LOVE YOU!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 4:21:00 PM

    wow this is good,i love it

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 11:35:00 PM

    Excellent. Very touching write.Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:16:00 PM

    hi anne.... passing by to thank you for your visit and hoping to read you again!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Hi Anne, i see you are on line, I hope you are enjoying the weekend. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:42:00 PM

    Anne....very heart wrenching very good poem....emotional for me to read knowing a fifteen year old was feeling good to see that beautiful smile!

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 11:42:00 AM

    Anne, It is so so good you were able to write and release some of those emotions---and write very well btw. You are a very beautiful and talented young lady. So glad you're back to share with us--Love Ya!

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:01:00 PM

    Hello Anne just dropping by to see how you are doing.

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 5:35:00 PM

    AWEsome dear sista Anne.. i do love your poem so beautifully written and nice.. enjoyed so very much :) Sk

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 3:43:00 AM

    You are very kind. Your passion and honesty are very refreshing. It's funny, but emotions are enjoyable. I also think they are road signs that guide us. I look forward to reading your work. Your work also reminds me of places I have been. You have a constructive outlook which indicates how adaptable and intelligent you are! Fondly.

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 9:53:00 PM

    words painted with the brush of adversity and triumph. keep on writing from that place, and it will inspire hearts and minds

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 7:00:00 PM

    One word dear lovely. cheri

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 4:53:00 PM

    Wow, this is absolutely talent sweetie no matter how young you wrote this!! Magnificent. Like I stated to you before, you have magic flowing through your pen love. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Geez, such depth from a 15-year old. This is good poetry, my friend. Keep writing, sweet Anne. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 11:19:00 AM

    at that age , you were already deep, anne... scorching word choices reminding me of avril lavigne's songs... just wonderful!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 6:20:00 AM

    Anne, it is so wonderful to have this collection of your work here. You are an inspiration of hope and love for all who are fortunate enough to visit. You just keep up the great work you are doing! I hope you will continue to write often at it is such a pleasure to read your work. Life is a journey! You are making me smile!

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 11:30:00 AM

    Wow you wrote this when you were fifteen excellent work poet.