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BLINKING LIGHTNING BUGS

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BLINKING LIGHTNING BUGS

                                                    blinking lightning bugs
                                               twilight stars here and there
                                                    ground's shadowy sky

                                                     songs of the silence
                                                 buzzing musical faint notes
                                                          play in unison 

                                                      diamond glow dress
                                                 near their beautiful region
                                                     passers smile with joy

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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:14:00 PM

    i love the imagery here to hear the sounds of bugs. enjoyed!

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/27/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot of sweet thanks to you, my friend, for visiting my page and for giving comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Bi; I love the way you mixed the lightin bugs with the twilight stars. It has to be something beautiful to see. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/26/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:51:00 AM

    Exceptional descriptive lines about the Lightning Bugs..They add a glow to the evening..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/25/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:24:00 PM

    this is beautiful, BL

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/25/2013 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Beautiful friend always sees beautiful. Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:58:00 PM

    glowing kind of 'ku, bl... you captured the scene so well!... see you when you visit my page..:) huggs

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/25/2013 8:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi! friend, thanks for saying glowing Ku. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 11:17:00 AM

    - BEAUTIFUL!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/24/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot of thanks to you. Loved always, bl