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Attic

rabies ridden bats
batting about my belfry
blind inspiration…

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  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:57:00 PM
    Love that alliteration, tim. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 2:03:00 PM
    LOL--Love it Tim!

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 5:32:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Tim

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:29:00 PM
    Excellent play on words. I really enjoyed reading. Also, thanks for your review on my work-i appreciate it. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:08:00 AM
    So blind is the bat.. Blind inspiration leads to the most excitimg worlds and forbidden places..Interestimg senryu..By the way tnks for your lovely comment and your footle.You put a smile on my face..Cherry syrup and caramel are my favs.Re my surname i get all kind of interpretations..hehe : )

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:32:00 PM
    how cool. Blind inspiration. I love how you made that connection, Tim.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 11:35:00 AM
    - Where did the idea come from .... well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Hello Tim, blind as a bat, thoughts are going through my mind...... LOL. i don't know... I got to say... stay out of the attic. a great senryu. love..LINDA

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:27:00 PM
    And so I to feel your words! Laura :0)