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Below is the poem entitled SEES IN SHADOWED MIND which was written by poet BL devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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                                   Like a deep dark unseen shadow 
                                      a big hill in front of thoughts
                           rising sun's rays have no chance to play its role 
                                  blocked all the ways there's no hole
                                ghosts senses open their field silently 
                                   to play all nonsense games with in

                                 speaks all the day bad words as honey
                                      cheers up for tears of one's pain
                                       no feeling for others' plight too
                              in wake in dream mind is set up to ruin only
                                   among all social civilized human being
                                         no one even knows about it 

                                       The only way is the way to God 
                                    rubbing heart by chanting His name  
                                         prayer brings a seed of faith
                                        manure respect helps to grow
                                      conscience fruits evolves in heart
                         certainly blessing's twilight sees in shadowed mind 

                                 For contest: sponsored by Gail Angel Doyle

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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 11:18:00 PM
    a nice entry for her contest, BL. You are an enlightened man.

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 7/27/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot, always, always, bl
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 3:02:00 PM
    One that speaks of your faith..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 7/27/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I feel happy with your nice comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Hello BL., a praising poem.. tender images... xox~ Linda

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 7/24/2013 6:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi! friend, it was just felt and written from the practical experience got. Thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl