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Forever Eternally With You

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Below is the poem entitled Forever Eternally With You which was written by poet Marquis MC Mills-Cooper. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Forever Eternally With You

The crickets
filled the air
one night, with
subtle chirping
beats

The moon
and stars set
up to shine,
as they take
their seats

The wind
has settled down
to sing the
songs it’s tucked
away

They sound
like graceful
symphonies an
orchestra would
play

But if
my mind
were on those
things, my heart
it never knew

For it
simply ignored
those sounds
and thought of
only you

My heart
you see, it
dedicates some
time for you
each day

To think
about your
loveliness, keep
other thoughts
bay

Most times
you are the
reason why I’m
in that happy
mood

That special
place I spoke
about, what
joy you do
include

You fill
me full of
happiness, a
feeling that never
parts

You have
that pure
divinity, to
cure my aching
heart

You are
the one I’ve
longed for
and dreamed
about at night

The one
that’s made
my darkest days
clear and full
of light

You stir
me in a
potent love, a
love so ever
new

And now
I want to
spend forever…
eternally with
you

Written in Queens, New York -Circa 1995

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  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Shakesphere would have loved this as I do..not that I am in that class !! Honestly , it is very beautiful writing .

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/30/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awww Yvette, i've read your poetry remember, so don't try and hustle me -you're a good writier in your own right! But thank you for the warm words...I've always love this poem, so I'm glad there are poeple out there that share my love for it. MC
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:21:00 AM
    Your poem was as much a pleasure to read as it was beautiful. Great one :)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/29/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much! You are too kind. If you enjoy the lovey-dovey stuff then you came to the right place -please, read more
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:08:00 AM
    love the sound, and the beat... they make eternity sound complete... thank you sharing...LINDA

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/28/2013 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda, I wrote this a very long time ago, but I still remember working out the words and patterns -definite favorite of mine. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 10:41:00 PM
    This poem tugs at the heart....beautifully written thankyou4sharing marquis....onelove~<3 cherie...

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/28/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by and reading and your kind words in this comment are greatly appreciated! MC
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:24:00 AM
    - Thank you for your beautiful poem, it was pleasant to read. - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 7/28/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so glad you liked it! This one has a special place in my total body of work. I'm really honored that it has been appreciated by so many to include you. Thanks again Anne! MC