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The Dream

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The Dream

The grove was beautifully decorated                                                                                                                            The spectators too many to count                                                                                                                                    Couples entered walking hand in hand,some were friends,some strangers but I did not mind,as long as they had come to see me;                                                                                                                                      I saw so many kinds of love,blending together perfectly                                                                                                                               I saw all those whom I had loved in my lifetime                                                                                                                                  Now they were here to see me,I felt happy,I was glad, I saw the people, whom I had seen before...                                                                                                                               The grove was shimmering twilight,as the couples walked by                                                                                                                                         It was becoming dark,everyone started leaving,I watched them silently,bidding my goodbyes                                                                                                                             I hope they visit me once again....in a short while.

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  1. Date: 12/17/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Thanks for the positive remarks about my poems. Your style is unique. Your line breakage accentuates the fluidity of your thoughts and vision. The separate columns that are formed as a result of your line breakage form separate, conscious and unconscious abstract poems. These lines reflect how the mind really thinks and perceives inner and outer space. Also, this poem beautifully illustrates the utopian paradise of platonic love that can resonate within every sentient being.