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I feel The Need,,,

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I feel The Need,,,

Somebody stop me!!
I feel The Need,,,
The Adrenaline rush!!
The essence of a bling
My heart pumps so fast
O, i feel so harsh harsh

Somebody grab my 
horses!!
2000 horse power
I feel The Need,,,
I feel like i'm on fire
Somebody stop me!!
Lest i taste an electric 
wire!

My guts are engaged
O, o momento
I cannot help it!!
I just feel The Need,,
The Need,,,
The Need For Speeeed!.


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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:25:00 PM
    An adrenalin impact poem. Nicely written. Connie

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/26/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Connie
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:36:00 PM
    wow, Share, the adrenaline.. LOL, love it Godwins, now hold on tight... a very xool poem...love..Linda

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/26/2013 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol thanks LINDA:),,
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:12:00 PM
    Quite the poem you have written! Really great read- I love it! :)

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/26/2013 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne:)
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:44:00 AM
    Where are you high tailing it to my friend, I'd rather take the slow boat to China, that way I don't miss a thing, very cute G, I like the fact that your first name starts with God, Oh My you have big shoes to fill, Smile thank you for the comments, have a good one xxx

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/23/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Loooool "Big shoes to fill" lol so much for humor.lol it's a pleasure my friend:)
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:43:00 AM
    wheee.. i like the kinetic feel of this one, godwins... and the final line whippps me away.... fantastic!..:) huggs

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/23/2013 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wheee..haha thank you soo much Nette!!:D
    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/23/2013 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:30:00 AM
    - Take it easy ........ well done Godwins - Thanks for visiting on my last poem, enjoyable! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/23/2013 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will try Anne, thank you:D
    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/23/2013 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry