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She worries so much

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The story of how I broke my one true loves heart into a million pieces, and the damage I caused. I could not read it to her the tears blocked all sight. I hope it's a lesson to others   Peter


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She worries so much

She worry’s so much

She worries in case he’ll leave her
In her crazy kind of mind
Old memories they haunt her
And now they’ve made her blind
She does not see reality
She’s living in a dream
She’s built herself a nightmare
It’s just the way it seems.

She doesn’t see him laughing
And singing all the time
And how he is so loveable
And writes her lovely rhymes
How he cares so much when she is down
She never see those things
She sees the horror in her mind
That her thoughts so often bring.

When will she ever see him?
The way he really is
He’s wrote five thousand poems for her
All filled with loves sweet bliss
But is it not too late for her
When she lives back in the past
The damage done by foolish acts
It be so very vast

23 July 2013 @ 1250hrs





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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 12:39:00 AM
    Beautiful write, thank you for sharing these deep emotions!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 7/31/2013 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Karissa, for you comments...Peter
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:49:00 PM
    Hello Peter, i see why she will always worry.. i wonder if the trust is so badly damaged... thank you for sharing your poem... hope the fear of him leaving will ease out. xox~ LINDA

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 7/24/2013 2:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know it is slowly being repaired and I am so happy about that, thanks Linda for your comments....Peter
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Sounds like a true life experience Peter...So sad and so beautifully expressed - Tim

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 7/24/2013 2:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is one of lifes many sadnesses, but we live with it, thank you Tim....Peter
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:28:00 AM
    - She is not able to accept his love .... always doubting ... - Very well written Peter. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 7/24/2013 1:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am beginning to understand now, thank you for your comments Anne Lise....Peter