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Moonbeams

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Moonbeams

Moonbeams shining down
dancing with the shadows 
swirling maiden  flaring gown
rabbits flee down their burrows

Trees casting shapes of mystery
whilest the beams light them up
changing again to new scenery
as the moon rides by at a gallop

World clothed in dark of night
night creatures shuffling around
will be time soon for all to unite
and fade away into the background

written 07/23/2013

contest Surprise me

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:13:00 AM
    Shadow., congrats on your well deserved victory. G.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/5/2013 8:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Giorgio ty dear so kind of you glad you enjoyed Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:52:00 PM
    Nicely done. congratulations. Love, Joyce

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/28/2013 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Joyce nice to see you Ty for your time reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Cngratulations on a very fine win, Shadow! Always,Annalise

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/27/2013 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Annalise and ty so much Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Shadow, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/27/2013 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty so much Linda I am honored by G have a good W/E Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:28:00 AM
    Shadow congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/27/2013 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Connie and Ty so much Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Really lovely write dear Shadow.I'm glad I stopped by tonight to read your stuff .Greetings to you.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/26/2013 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dearest M.M so nice to see you ty for kind comments I love your poem love Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:09:00 PM
    will be time soon for all to unite,, nice write ;}

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Debbie and ty for reading happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Are the last three words supposed to be connected? If so it somehow detracts from an otherwise excellent poem. Thanks for your visits today.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ops ty Richard will correct glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:01:00 PM
    ......."will be time soon for all to unite"...., I say wow! It's really very nice ending. Loved always, bl

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    BL ty for time reading glad you enjoyed it
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:07:00 AM
    Bravo Shadow! G.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty so much G appreciated Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 9:15:00 AM
    great poem. wonderful shadow. (:C jenish

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi C jenish Ty very much Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 6:04:00 AM
    Delightful read Shadow, It flows so well ,just a pleasure to read. Anne

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Anne Ty most inspiring Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:34:00 AM
    - Shadow, thanks for the very nice poem today. - Always enjoyable to read your poems. Luck in contest !!!! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 11:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne Lise ty so much gl to you as well Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:55:00 PM
    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/25/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Ravi so nice of you to stop in and read Ty Shadow x smiles