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UMM6

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UMM6

*6 syllables*
Umm...
Wait a moment...
Umm...


Let me think for a time...

I hate that I love you...

You think this is sublime?

Well, let me tell you this:

I hate you-you-you're decisions 

Umm...
Wait,  I shouldn't have said that...
Umm...

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  1. Date: 7/30/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Funny how inspiration comes to us. Burning bridges is as you note not such a good thing. Not doing it doesn't mean we have to cross it.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 4:17:00 PM
    I always have ummm moments when I really shouldn't have said whatever I just said! I can relate! Don't dump on yourself! I liked it! -Heather

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:58:00 PM
    well...I saw a CAPTCHA preview say UMM6, so I got inspired to write this poem with 6 syllables...hope you like it...hopefully (this one's my worst one...I know it hah)