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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 4:48:00 PM
    I not only see you as a beautiful poetess, but now as a peacemaker.. You must be effective because I don't feel tension here... Yikes!!! does that mean I am part of the problem....Jake

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Hi Gail-- indeed, we are all created with our own unique talents and ways of expressing them-- made for a purpose in Gods eyes. I love P/Soup and the way it uplifts the soul and encourages writers to bravely post their poems-- often very personal. This is a wonderful depiction of that-- besides the sad mention of conflicts-- I love the beauty of the stars.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:44:00 AM
    Gail; I don't know what's going on, but I have notice a difference. I had not been around too much, but now I'm feeling a lot better. This is a nice message. In God's eyes - we are all important. Everyone has their own style of writing and that is what makes poetry beautiful. Thanks for this message......Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:09:00 PM
    This is an incredible write my friend! I loved your message and hope that it all will come to pass! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 1:54:00 PM
    I couldn't have said it better myself my dear friend Gail, I am honored to be starring aside you, may we all be a cluster of stars love you stupendously true xxx

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:32:00 AM
    - Yes, today's best word Gail !! - All the "stars" shines the best they can! - "Gail-star" shines always so beautiful! - Thank you my friend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Excellent and a RESOUNDING yes from me! =)

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Continuation of previous comment: 5th line: replace "there's" with "there have" last line: place a comma after "negativity". If you make all my suggested corrections, your poem will appear better to everyone.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 10:18:00 AM
    This reads almost like a sermon. I was not aware of any antagonism on this site. This work is inspirational, but a few errors have to be corrected: 2nd line: replace "radiant' with "radiate" you need a verb where you have an adjective. 3rd line: replace the comma with a semi-colon. 4th line: expunge "that"-it is not needed. The presence of "all" appears optional. You can leave it there, but I don't believe it's necessary.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:59:00 AM
    :) A timely and beautiful piece, Gail! :) Yes...I couldn't agree with you more! Sage advice...hugs