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WHERE THE MOMENT LIES

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WHERE THE MOMENT LIES

the point where the sea meets sky is where the moment lies never quite clearly observed or grasped taking a step back into our past will bring the moment closer but as we move forward the future remains out of our reach ever shifting in perceived expectations the moment lies at the edge where the sea meets the sky
© 2013 Suzette Crous

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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 1:03:00 AM

    I love this Suzette - I love seeing the different poems you create under Suzette Prime. Keep setting the bar.

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 1/26/2014 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Vicky. I am currently working on a new book of verse, featuring Suzette Prime. :-)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Suzette in her prime would be a more appropriate form...You have been footled again...

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:11:00 PM

    i like the cadence and tonality of this one, sue... you flow in your form... reminds me of one i invented called trinette... gentle like a sping breeze..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:52:00 AM

    Hi Sue, nice poem with a captivating ending. "the moment lies at the edge where the sea meets the sky"

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 10:34:00 AM

    Lovely, Suzette...LOVELY! :) Oh...to have a form that carries your name...What sweet bliss! Hugs!

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 7/22/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Eileen. Why don't you give the form a try? :-)