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Haiku 69

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Haiku 69

	
	
	Haiku 69
	
	
	my warm fingertips...
	patterns traced on your damp skin
	dewey pink petals

	
	

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 5:51:00 PM
    nice one. congrats.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Kiran... Jack
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 9:13:00 AM
    great haiku...congrats on your win :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for he comment, Sandra... jack
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Jack

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you... Jack
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:36:00 AM
    super haiku congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 3:27:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your win, Jack - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Anne-Lise... jack
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:41:00 PM
    Gorgeous one, Jack. Congrats.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Andrea... jack
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Jack, one amazing haiku.... Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    IO appreciate your selecting my poem. It's a real honor... Jack
    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you... jack
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Simply beautiful, Jack. I like, I like, I like. Licia :-)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/24/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again for the very nice comment... Jack
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 6:54:00 AM
    Nice! Laura

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/24/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Laura, for reading my haiku... Jack
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:05:00 AM
    Hi Jack, this is a nice Haiku with strong symbolic meaning."Patterns traced on damp skin"

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/24/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the comment, Christine... Jack
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 12:28:00 AM
    you just keep putting out the best haiku. this is evocative.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/23/2013 7:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again, as always... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:50:00 AM
    sounds very beautiful, enjoyed your lovely haiku .... ~always, Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/25/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Linda. I always appreciate your comments... jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:44:00 AM
    As a man, I can comfortably admit I got goosebumps. Well done, sir! =D

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Goosebumps are good things, Drake. I'm glad they happened, and thanks for the congrats... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:39:00 AM
    - It's just ..... beautiful Jack !!!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! That's a very nice compliment, comin from you especially... Jack