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ABC - Feelings

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ABC - Feelings

About this time - night time
Between the sheets I am wrapped
Cozy and warm - you and me
Delicately I am caressed by your touch
Enveloped by your love
Feeling the intensity of our moment
Goosebumps proudly revealing themselves on naked flesh
Happiness fills me inside and out
I am content beyond my wildest imagination
Jailed willingly in your tower of love
Knotted and tangled deliciously with emotions
Life is on a 24/7 high
Moment to moment that we share
New words expressed, a book begins
Opening the first page words proudly inked
Permanently stained like a tattoo on my skin
Quietly embraced within your arms
Relishing each second, minute and hour
Spent with you tears well inside
Telling you how special this is
Unified is how I feel with you
Vaults of energy pump through my veins
With you love is intense and so profound
Xenocryst are you - unique - my best friend
You are the brightness of stars and the
Zest that fulfills my life - Thank you


I think this is still within the ABC form? Rather than 5 lines I have travelled the alphabet. Let me know if this is not considered an ABC form and i would be happy to edit my post to reflect what style it should be.......

Shaz

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  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:06:00 PM

    Just dropping by to say hello

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:42:00 PM

    i like it

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Good morning Shaz, thanks for taking my suggestion. This is such a great poem. Have a great day. If you have a chance please read my Ice King Poem. I made some changes this morning and would appreciate your thoughts on the poem.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:18:00 PM

    I do believe it is an ABC... A lovely one at that! :o)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:30:00 PM

    Shaz, wow! I love this ABC poem. it works for me. thank you for sharing your feelings from a-z... your awesome...LINDA

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:33:00 AM

    Permanently stained like tattoo on skin. Please consider this change. This feels like a free verse which for me is the mark of a great ABC

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 7/23/2013 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Rick....I agree that tattoo is better....I guess i tried to be different from a previous post on my personal Just Words blog where I had used tattoo....I willl change it.....Thank you for the suggestion ...Shaz
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 4:50:00 AM

    As Milton said, "ABC, XYZ, whatever"... it's a goody, dear Shaz! Hugs from Canada! xoxox

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:48:00 AM

    - Being in love feels warm and well .... keep the good feeling .... forever .... love it, sooo sweet Shaz!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:24:00 PM

    I would consider this ABC form, I could be wrong though. Regardless, this poem is fantastic.

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 7/22/2013 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi casey - thank you for stopping by - Im glad you enjoyed ....Shaz
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 3:57:00 PM

    I don't have a clue nor do I care. This is a masterpiece regardless of the form! ABC, XYZ, whatever! LOL!! It's amazing and beautiful! Love the imagery and metaphor! Milt

    Cheesman Avatar Shaz Cheesman Date: 7/22/2013 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Thanks Milt Well i will go with the consensus lol