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Below is the poem entitled Addicted which was written by poet Malcolm Brooks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Addicted

My Mind Is Going Crazy
Everything is Looking Hazy
When I Get "A Taste of Nature"
Yes Thats Her Nickname "A Taste of Nature"
Im Addicted To Her Lips
With Mary Jane She lays on me a soft kiss
Hunted by a great feeling, that has me feeling like I need more
A Troubled Mind
Its My Healing 
Please put me in a Straightjacket to prevent me from my bad habits 
Its like weights on my feet and I'm at the bottom of the pool trying to speak
Who Am I Living For?
Am I Living For Me? or having these Addictions Overpower me making me weak
For A moment I get stronger
Praying for God to stay with me just a little bit longer 
But She Said she would always be down and don't forever sounds much more longer
"Come Lay With Me"
It Feels Good
But She Is Making Me Sick
I Do Not Like This Feeling But She Is Here For My Feelings and When I Want to Forget
Its a Love and Hate Battle
A Day and Night Hassle 
Into a Fiery Furnace or into a Beautiful Castle
I Am Addicted
I know what should the end be
Im just being stupid and letting her love me 
When She Away From Me 
I can Feel Her Touch Me
Im Addicted
But tonight I'm  Breaking the chain
All of my Addictions is all in my Brain
I Just Gave it a Gender and a Cute Name 
Call it Growing Pains because Im struggling
But it is Time to Grow
They Say Im All Talk
So Shhhhhhhhhhh ..

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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:43:00 PM
    Hi Malcom, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

    Brooks Avatar Malcolm Brooks
    Date: 8/21/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Malcom, stopping to read this one once again.... Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA

    Brooks Avatar Malcolm Brooks
    Date: 8/21/2013 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:54:00 AM
    good pen well describing addiction congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles

    Brooks Avatar Malcolm Brooks
    Date: 8/21/2013 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 1:34:00 AM
    Malcolm, There is one addiction you can never really give up and that is girls/women, they are a big turn on, and you just know you love them women are a drug I recommend, they may scramble your brain and drive you crazy as other drugs do, but women are really good for you and make you feel so good, so have a large dose of them. Very good poem. John

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:49:00 PM
    you are right Malcolm, the addiction is only mind deep... don't let it take over. , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Hi Malcolm, i know about addiction. I love it when i can break free from it. your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT *

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:57:00 PM
    I like this I wish everyone around me can at least get the hint have something such as this expire them. They look at me as the square lol so nicely done.

    Brooks Avatar Malcolm Brooks
    Date: 7/22/2013 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol yea i could be looked at a square by judgment of not knowing me and just looking at me but when you know me a different story ..
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:29:00 AM
    - Hello new member: Malcolm - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - It's nice to be able to read your first poem. - You write very well, I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Brooks Avatar Malcolm Brooks
    Date: 7/22/2013 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You, I Really Appreciate it :)