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The Perfect Day

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The Perfect Day

The light of the sun
looks down on earth,
like a face with a 
gentle smile

The earth so unique
and magnificent, moves
with a graceful style

But when clouds
come out and move
about and try to make
foul play

The earth and sun,
work together as one,
to create the perfect day

Written in Queens, New York -Circa 1993

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  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:36:00 PM
    What makes a perfect day??? expand your thinking beyond tthe obvious. This is pleasant but lacks the depth I feel within your other pieces. This is a great title and from it you can weave an emotionaly impactful poem. ( I hope this is not to honest, it is not my intention to be critical but rather to open up your poetic spirit)

    MC Mills-Cooper Avatar Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
    Date: 8/2/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No way man I appreciate your honesty and you're right this one does lack depth. No excuse, but this was one of my earlier poems, I wrote this one at about 15. LOL! I still remember sitting in class writing it LOL! Still, it's and old favorite of mine, though I've thought many times of revising it. Now maybe I will. Thanks Rick!!! MC