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Benson Drew

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Benson Drew

Through the Pit's mouth she saw it-
Inert body prostate, lightly lit
the pale face staring up, hollow eyes
the cold waters, the mud, the mice.

Through the pit's mouth, she gaped down
into the very face of death's count-
Her heart thereforth listed afar,
in the soul of the quite traveller.

O Benson Drew! O Miss Drew!
If only she knew-
There pours the tears and anguish
Here escapes insanity and gibberish.

Watch her! watch her! Watch...
Reach out! Catch her! Catch...
But Alas, she drops ten feet below
For the arms of the fallen Moor.

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  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:42:00 AM
    a cool winning poem. :-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 6:37:00 AM
    congrats on your win xxx

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Gerald, a good winning poem...Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Great win. congratulations. love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:27:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win & taking the less traveled path and writing with panache & punctuation ;) Nancy Drew fan here! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:19:00 PM
    I did get link to Nancy Drew, maybe capitalize Moor [into the arms of the fallen Moor] so nice to meet you! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 6:54:00 AM
    So intriguing who was benson Drew? Are you speaking of Nancy Drew as well? Is the moor a place? or a man? Let me know please..L ight & Love

    Nforche Avatar Gerald Nforche
    Date: 7/20/2013 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ma'am, the moor is the man, black, moor like Othello, Drew is in love with, ma'am. i used the name Drew because of my readings of Nancy Drew mystery stories. i wanted a name that will ring a bell. the nameless Moor is the one Drew loves. pls do read Maria Drew too, one of my poems. thanks so much