Below is the poem entitled Mighty Old Warrior which was written by poet
Sivey. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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Pain, instilled within
Goes into a state of numbness…
Mighty old warrior
• The ice cube sent me into pain at first for a while then my hand went numb from the extreme cold that I felt…then the water was dripping from the cracks of my fingers. And this continued until the ice cube melted. A little pain came back to my hand while I was waiting for the numbness to subside. But I couldn’t represent this within my Haiku. I enjoyed this hands on contest. It was unique and fun.
Contest: ICE KING (in less than 10 lines) For the adventures one.
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