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Tangled Vines

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Tangled Vines

To break through the darkness, into the fresh sunlight
To press ever upwards towards the light so bright
Twisting and turning and stretching arms out wide
Climbing pushing ever upwards, no more time to bide

Nothing can stop the growth, forever on and up
Until you wrapped around me and drank from the same cup
Your arms held me tight you began to share my growth
There is no telling one from the other, we have become both…

Like a twisting tangled vine, two parts but one another
There is no separating without harm caused to each other
Knitted together forever, in a loving tangled mess
Sharing the same support, having each other to bless.

When autumn comes and our leaves age and fall
Remember vines are perennial and will grow on again so tall
Holding on to each other our vines will then bear fruit
Each year they grow stronger and none can then uproot.

© 19/07/2013 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 8/3/2013 12:37:00 PM
    great poem from one of the great poet on PS...thanks for sharing this my friend Mandy..Have a nice day always!! cheers! Maria

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:13:00 AM
    This was truly excellent Mandy.Keep up the excellent job.A fav for this indeed.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:40:00 PM
    Oh my goodness, this is absolutely gorgeous! I loooove the third stanza, especially the first two lines. Well done, my lady!

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:47:00 PM
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    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 7/22/2013 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi thanks Craig, have you got the right person here or is this an opinion of yours that they may like my stuff if that is so Thank you and I will look into it xx
    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 7/21/2013 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    They have agreed to publish two of mine and I think they prefer offbeat, humorous stuff...Right up your alley
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 9:36:00 PM
    Great one, Mandy. That is the way it should be. Enjoyed!

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Excellent subject you have chosen and worded so nicely that twisted in to one and one only. Enjoyed a lot. Good luck. Loved always, my friend. Always, bl

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 6:34:00 PM
    Just beautiful! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:54:00 AM
    you did the contest theme proud, Mandy. I love the positive message you inspired us with using the words tangled vines.

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Mandy, this is a beautiful analogy! Great write! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 7/19/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw thanks Kim but it can't go in the contest she wants free verse only I think but thanks for the support and I promise to start some commenting again asap.xx
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:17:00 AM
    two as one, this is really lovely Mandy.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 7/19/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks harry that show I see things xx