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Had a bad day today with my computer, and this had to be written  Peter


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Computers

computers

Lets speak about computers
Well hear me while I rant
Understand these ruddy beasts
You know, I really can’t
I don’t think that I’m stupid
But I haven’t got a clue
The things they drive me half insane
They do, they really do.

Have you ever seen a grown man cry
Well take a look and see
When that computer plays me up
The tears that come to me.
The kids they come and teach me how
But nothing does sink in
And then I rant and carry on
And make this childish din.

I’d throw it in the ruddy bin
But I really need the thing
I really could not live without it
If you know what I mean
I have these love/hate feelings
It’s the love of all my life
And yet I hate the ruddy thing
When it causes too much strife.

18 July 2013 @ 1915hrs.



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  1. Date: 7/1/2014 3:41:00 PM
    Ha! Can't live with 'em ... can't live without 'em ... what a dilemma! And ... oh so true, Peter! This is a GREAT write! Jack C

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 7/1/2014 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack you are damned right, my friend. I really have a love/hate relationship with these machines. I appreciate your kind comments, my friend...peter
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Peter, and yes it does cause a lot of strife, and take away... SKAT

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 7/19/2013 1:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I love having one, but I get so frustrated with them; thanks Skat, for your comments Peter
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Strongly disagree, but really liked how the rythm corelates with disturbed thoughts. nice write!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 7/19/2013 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Nikola, I couldn't do without one really, but they do frustrate me Peter