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  1. Date: 8/6/2014 9:14:00 PM
    Cyndi,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 6:00:00 PM
    This stopped me dead in my tracks. An awesome write!! "My school-less angelfish flouncing in elements and shimmering in pink ruffles while sun ripened ringlets dance A minstrel disguised as a red-winged blackbird returns her endless chatter, won-over" Beyond Crackin'!! Congrats on this perfection being chosen to be featured this week. I am fav'ing this my friend and thanking you for it1

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:36:00 PM
    Wow Dee to my fav's too exquisite, I really loved [ afternoons dripping like vanilla cones ] Please go weigh in on the sonnet choice for verse 3? [crown?] Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 3:37:00 PM
    One of my favs of yours.Made me think of my own baby girl..When the time comes I have to let her wings free and let her fly towards...beside against and over those margins too.Going to my favs..So very beautiful the words from a mother inspired by her toffeemilk skinned beautiful child.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 11:28:00 PM
    love love love it.

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:19:00 PM
    What a delightful poem! A very cool and rewarding effect for the reader. Glad I stumbled upon your work. Keep it up! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 2:25:00 PM
    welll, i can;t help but revel in the splashes of wonder distinctly pouring within the lines, cyn...you manage to stir me with musings of summer's innocence and introspective look at our child's future... this grows on me as i feel the lyrical yet delicate movement of your poesy..with the right pauses, punctuations are not needed...charming me no end in its flow!... :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Brilliant flow. No punctuation necessary here. This was tremendous.

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 4:07:00 AM
    Like Craig, I didn't notice anything because I was so mesmerized by the phrasing and word flow...You draw great inspiration from your daughter...On to my fav poet list you go! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 8:33:00 PM
    soup mail... PD

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 9:30:00 AM
    It reads perfectly Cyndi--never gave it a thought while reading this until you mentioned at the end---I was too caught up in your loving words! Hope your new home is wonderful!