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Separation

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Separation

A rare explosion Severed head from weary neck Pieces became flocks Vast number of ravens fly Killing the kicking body
Russell Sivey b) serious category Contest: Old or New in Five or less Sponsor: Francine Roberts 7/17/2013

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 3:12:00 PM

    This is gruesome..I hope that it wasn't a recent happening and definitly hope that it was not your family..Thanks for your visits..I appreciate the time spent there..I hope that your life has about settled..Sara

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:36:00 PM

    vividly expressed with such poetic impact, russell.. is this related to your recent accident?... wonderful work in its own league... congrats on your new wins!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 2:29:00 PM

    wow, some great imagery in this one. Very imaginative, Russell.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:34:00 AM

    Pretty intense & fierce. I LIKE! Fantastic!

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:41:00 AM

    Unlike your usual poetry Russell Such a dark brush Yet powerful and riveting , awesome one xxx

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 11:50:00 PM

    Wow Russell, this is serious .....Seren

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 11:11:00 PM

    Oooh really serious. I liked its composition and depth in so few lines.