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Losing weight

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Losing weight

Solving the weight problem

Most folk say they can’t lose weight
But me I well might this debate
Eat much less 
Walk much more
Then most will lose the weight for sure.

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  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:16:00 AM

    Great limerick, Peter. I wrote one about "My Skinny Doctor" I think you will enjoy... Jake

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 7/22/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much jake, I will go to your site and read your poem...Peter
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 4:34:00 PM

    This is so cute and clever.....being allergic to sugar I struggle with keeping weight on. Replace your sugar with honey, much healthier. Hugs

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 7/18/2013 9:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Cecilia, that's a good one two; honey is so much better for one, Thank you for reading Peter
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 12:15:00 PM

    Oh Yeah... I have another one.. avoid all sugar at all costs-- not only does it pile on the pounds, but it is a slow killer. Solution= Exercise and no carb/no sugar.. Clever limerick we can all relate to in our old age :)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 7/17/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That us so very true, but I can't help having it in my tea; another one to be conquered. Thank you Kim for your comments Peter
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:03:00 AM

    it's all mind set, enjoyed this one you are very insightful, ~always, Linda

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 7/17/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda, you are too kind peter
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 3:46:00 AM

    - Yes, you are right! - Well written Peter! (Pleased to see your face) - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 7/17/2013 4:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ann, your comments are always welcom Peter
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 11:53:00 PM

    Mine would have to rhyme, sew up my jaw.....lol Peter well done I like it.....Seren

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 7/17/2013 3:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Seren, yes that would have worked just as well, I just get fed up with all these people making money out of peoples foolishness Peter