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  1. Date: 7/17/2013 7:09:00 AM
    This is a very intresting write, I enjoyed it very much. I am also so sorry to hear about the loss of your dad. I will say a prayer for you.

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 11:45:00 PM
    I love the way you duplicated those four stanzas again to make an eight stanza poem! It stands out more and it emphasizes certain points of the write! What a glorious poem my friend Great Work!!