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Breathing

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Breathing

The sty in my eye is throbbing
Keeping my thoughts away from this
The ache in my toes is increasing
So I believe there’s something amiss
The pain feels great, though, in contrast
To what I’ve experienced before
I cannot wish this all away
Because I’ve already closed the door
Breathe slower, run faster, run longer
I close my eyes for a moment or two
As I feel the wind upon my face
I don’t think to keep going, I just do.
Dogs somewhere are barking
A rooster now belts his morning song
A rainbow is in the sky beside me
I wonder if it’s been there all along
For though my breathing is ragged
And the sweat runs down my neck
I know that I’m in complete control,
I keep my own life in check.
The sky now shows its true colors
The sun rises as I slow to a walk
 I Breathe and let my heart recover
As the robins begin their talk.

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  1. Date: 7/20/2013 5:28:00 PM
    I was drawn by the interesting Avatar photo and impressed by the writing. A very interesting piece. I was not sure where it would lead and was pleasantly led down the path to the robins song.

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Very interesting work. Quite beautiful! I agree with many of the comments below. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading your morning song..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 2:53:00 PM
    Very nice... Slowing down from whirling thoughts is never easy... Jack

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Exceptional work Juli-Michelle, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 12:13:00 PM
    A tremendous piece of self-reflection. Such beauty & power.

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle
    Date: 7/16/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks!
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 11:49:00 AM
    Such a killer poem!! I love the way you write! I'm shocked there are no comments on this yet. Hugs!

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle
    Date: 7/16/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much :)