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  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:05:00 PM
    WOW this is a wonderful cinquain . I can see the hand flowing over the keys. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Very good Cinquin here Nette.Love it.These days contests of these forms has become almost obsolete here at poetrysoup.People are prefering long forms.I love this form.

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:54:00 PM
    One of the better cinquains I have ever seen , Nette!! I really like it and I bet francine will too.

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 1:01:00 PM
    WOW-- the imagery and expression in this short but intensive Cinquain is excellent !!

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 12:11:00 PM
    New form's new style is excellent. It's a magic like, enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 10:34:00 AM
    Words spoken on fine baby grand! Wonderful nette..

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 10:10:00 AM
    - Well written ...... bit sad my friend. - Luck in contest !!!!!!!!! - Have a nice day. - <3 / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 9:06:00 AM
    There is a bit of melancholy & reflection in these lines. Ah, the ebony rails...stunning.

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 8:02:00 AM
    Somehow this one gives me a very sad freling.I love how you were able to evoke a deep emotion in so few words..Well done sweet friend-Charma

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 7/16/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Feeling i meant : )
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 6:43:00 AM
    I like the mood this evokes.

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 6:28:00 AM
    If I were judging this, it would be a winner hands down! Congrats! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 6:23:00 AM
    Awesome theme you have chose for this contest entry my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing cinquain this morning! I love the line, "chasing ripples" it brings a visual aspect to the verse, such emotion too! What a delightful piece Nette, Great Work!! Soup Mail in a few minutes!

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:04:00 AM
    Nice. Good luck my friend Rick

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:49:00 AM
    Interesting way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your uniquely creative work..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara