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Broken

~Suicidal Night~

I sit alone in the dark.
In the dark I sit alone.
Nobody sees me.
I see nobody.

~***~

Flowers, above.
My eyes have darkened to a color never seen before.
Forever closed!
 
It Rains!
It Rains!

In this room, I've drowned too many times.
I remember cascades of water under my eyes.
My satin sheets wrinkle and cold.
I die and died every night.
No one sees the pain that kills me everyday.
The wounds that reach 6 feet deep.

Lucid demons
Bleeding wrist
Scary dreams
Screaming
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Incomplete'
Torn'
Broken-
Is how I live

I'm alone-
No one's around.
My body's like a coffin
Stiff in my own home.

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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  1. Date: 4/16/2014 6:04:00 PM

    Hello. First I want to thank u for commenting on my poem. I have never done this before, i usally keep my poems to my self but so far this experince has been pretty amazing. Everyone is so nice here. BTW love this poem, in away I could relate to it. I love the wording format and the true emotion that it portrays. If u wish to talk u can email me. (:

  1. Date: 4/12/2014 1:31:00 AM

    Waas up girl. Just dropped by to say hello, and to compliment you on a well-crafted, descriptive and real, poem. Loneliness. Seems to be a common theme among us twisted and tormented souls known as poets. Hey, look at Poe! Check out my latest when you get a chance. The theme? Loneliness. hugs mel :)

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 5:09:00 PM

    hearing the cold loneliness is felt through my soul, so break the locks run into the wonders of the world..... smile and hugs..... Gina

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 10:09:00 AM

    Wow, this poem is really amazing...

  1. Date: 3/28/2014 9:42:00 PM

    This really touched me, the darkest moment is followed by the brightest light

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 1:17:00 AM

    Hey SKAT, it's so deep and gripping..god bless :)

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 6:10:00 PM

    Very sad poem SKAT and Linda, it is awful to be depressed.

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 1:28:00 PM

    Very cool. Gripping. Keep it up sister.

  1. Date: 2/22/2014 5:19:00 AM

    Very powerful and sad write SKAT. Something so many are dealing with and should be known. I love Lucilla's comment. I wish all those in such pain would just lay it all down at His Feet. "Footprints in the Sand". Congratulations and God Bless.

  1. Date: 2/17/2014 4:24:00 PM

    yes a dramatic poem, written from the depths of despair but in that time of writing there is a release of discouragement to thwart or counteract those feelings. Thank you for your honesty in writing and thank you for encouraging me for my first time here. Sonnet

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 12:50:00 PM

    You both get a hug from this anonymous mug. Who congratulates you on your win. For surviving the day when it's cold, dark and grey. Is to never be considered a sin. It get's scary sometimes when it's just darkness that rhymes. And the clouds come and shadow your way. But, take heed, when there's need, Jesus will now proceed, to come to help you and brighten your day. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 10:39:00 PM

    Congrats on this very nice poem. Smile Jesus loves you..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 1:05:00 AM

    Big congrats on your fine win, Skat!!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 12:13:00 PM

    Many congratulations Skat xx

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 9:32:00 AM

    Congrats for a well deserved win SKAT. Kayod5.

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 1:31:00 AM

    Beautifully expressed. Congrats on your win. Ron

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 12:05:00 AM

    IT impressed me too and congrats on the win,

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 10:42:00 PM

    Sad indeed but Congrads in winning in a wonderful contest that I enjoyed more than all others.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 7:00:00 PM

    Very sad and gripping. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 6:10:00 PM

    Congrats on a fine win Skat

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 5:56:00 AM

    This is just great. I have a soft spot for darker poems. And this is by fare one of the best i have come across

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 10:26:00 PM

    Wow! This brings me back when I was 14. Very touching.

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 3:37:00 AM

    Beautiful, but sad. You speak from the heart. My goodness your work immense, skat. Jayne

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 2:14:00 AM

    Amazing work! You two are a fine pair for writing. Amazing!! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 10:24:00 PM

    SKAT...very poignant, and too damn close to my heart's reality! The demons still visit me on occasion in my days and scream e'er in my dreams! Too Powerful! Wonderful write. Robert xoxoxo

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 12:00:00 AM

    hey talented writter how are you.. once again you write sweetly..

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 1:09:00 AM

    The last verse is so heavy with still pain, yet so alive with awareness, it does not feel like defeat though, more like a furious awakening! I will fight the dark with you, because I know it well too, and I am on my feet, they have not buried us yet! J.A.B. FAV.!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 5:18:00 AM

    Very good use of words, clear and makes a profound statement

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 5:13:00 AM

    Hi Skat, Thank you for the nice comment om my first poem. This one of yours is also really deep and very touching. Thank full to find another friend out there. I hope you have a great day!

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 7:39:00 AM

    Skat What an outstanding piece. It speaks on so many level. Your Friend Tim

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