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Haiku 66

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Haiku 66

		
	
	
		
		
	Haiku 66
	
	
	opening lotus
	our intimate exchange
	dew on petals
	
	
				

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:59:00 AM
    cool, Jack!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/23/2013 7:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, James, for reading and commenting... Jack
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:13:00 AM
    Yes the lotus. Great vision of the moment. Congrats to you.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/23/2013 7:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Mitch. I appreciate your reading it... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Whoaaaa. THIS IS GREAT STUFF. A super well deserved win, And congrats.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/23/2013 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well, thanks a lot. It means a lot coming from a friend... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:37:00 PM
    oooh la la! http://haikujournal.org/submissions/ I think you are ready to publish try here Jack! Light & Love

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 8:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Debbie. I will... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:27:00 AM
    Very nice Jack.Congrats on the win.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 12:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you, Kash. Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Jack congratulations on your fantastic Haiku and win. Well deserve. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Connie. I'm checking on photos today... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Very creative work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the congrats, Sara... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 2:41:00 AM
    Ditto to your comment Jake...Honored to share the spot with you and your beautiful, sensual haiku...I think PD is a very wise judge, don't you? - Tim

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Tim. I agree with you about Linda, not to mention her extraordinary contributions to poetry soup... Jack
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 1:01:00 AM
    - A winning haiku, with great quality Jack - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/22/2013 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Anne-Lise... Jack
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:19:00 PM
    Wow Jack...nice description....congratulations

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/21/2013 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Donna, and congrats to you too... Jack
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Howdy, Jack :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/21/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda, This is quite an honor, coming from you. Thanks... I'm honored... Jack
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 4:43:00 PM
    wow, I love this haiku of yours, great metaphor, very sensual :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/15/2013 6:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Charlotte. It's good to hear from you again... Jack
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Absolutely beautiful! It's all about the simple pleasures. May they continue to blossom!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/15/2013 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Drake. I appreciate the very nice comment... Jack
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 12:16:00 PM
    <3 it ! - Well done, Jack !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/15/2013 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Anne-Lise. It's good to hear from you again... Jack