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Typically Luke Poem 13 - TREE HOUSE SAGA

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Typically Luke Poem 13 - TREE HOUSE SAGA

Luke was building a tree house He was building it all by himself A rusty old hammer, several bent nails And wood that used to be someone’s shelf We could all hear Luke working so hard Hammering and sawing away He was such a busy little bee He didn’t even have time to play He’d get the job half completed Then it would all just fall apart But he’d just pick up the pieces and start again The kid certainly does have heart Finally the tree house was finished Luke was as proud and as happy as could be He’d done a good job, but there was something missing And unfortunately that was the tree. But Luke shouldn't get too upset Shouldn't let it get to his head He may not have made a tree house But he had made a lovely shed.

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  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:47:00 AM
    ... he forgot the tree ... lol ... But a shed is well worked there too! - Well done Luce & Gary!!! - I have a "typical Adrian" poem ...... "A special camping trip" - to you, you are always welcome to read my poems Gary ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)