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Cold Heart

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Cold Heart

Cold Heart If I could erase your life, I would and at the same time erase mine to. When we met - I didn't know what life had in store for me. How poor must i be, for you never loved me. You lived with me and never loved me. How could you do that? What a cold heart you must have had. You took my love and with your hands you crushed it, then you threw it down and with your feet - you stumped it. What a cold heart you must have, to use the one that loved you so, than just like nothing - toss me to the side. life has many surprises and there is one in store for you. Don't be surprised if one day the same thing is done to you...
07/14/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:27:00 PM
    those who hurt you, leave it to Jesus, He is our defender, he is our saviour test the man you comes to your life, and don't trust him completely unlike god,we tend to have faults

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Corazon frio, but a poem with such wisdom!! Wonderful!

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:00:00 PM
    GREAT poem. I hope Karma does him in!! and I wish you the best in that recovery of yours. I bet you are getting better and better all the time.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 4:09:00 PM
    They say what goes around, comes around....I believe in Karma. Big hug to you.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Karma, karma...embrace it well, it will work for you. It always does. I've met some this way. Resepct to you for this piece...

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 8:33:00 AM
    He was never worthy of you and you are far more than he will ever be. Although your heart aches at least you have a heart capable of loving another.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 4:18:00 AM
    - Use and throw!! - Yes, have met such people. - "Cold Hart" (?) ... No, HEARTLESS! - Sad but well written Lucilla! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 7:52:00 PM
    Oh Lucilla, this is breaking my heart... :o( my heart is with Mystic Rose... More hugs coming your way. :o)

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Oh my, Lucilla you deserve someone who will love you as much as you love them, hope one day you find that special someone, until then, I'll just send you more hugs xxx