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A star has fallen

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A star has fallen

A star has fallen
a brush of light
that painted
a little corner deep
in the firmament
before it turns 
into dark.

A dream that vanished
before it even became
a glisten of wish
a bud that withered away
before I study it

or it was just a breath
which sacrificed itself
for other breaths
and shone like a Sun
before it unites itself
with the Infinite Being
the 'Ancient of Days'.

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  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:38:00 PM
    you are so in one with nature, with the universe!!

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 3:10:00 AM
    You have a way of transforming events that could have crushed hearts otherwise into something very beautifully written and inspiring. I'm crazy about your imagery! Keep it up!

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:48:00 PM
    like this poem, truly a classical style of writing, enjoyed

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 8/21/2013 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much!
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 12:45:00 PM
    An excellent write. Thank you for the nice review. Roger Dale Hadden.

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 8/21/2013 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, too!