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Stardust Drench me



Stardust drench me with dreams tonight fill this heart with heavenly lights when the world is deep asleep lonely hearts which love to weep sprinkle your dreams on them all wrap their pains with your bright shawl stardust drench me with dreams tonight fill this heart with heavenly lights ==========000=========== Date--14th July 2013 Contest--STARDUST IN AN OCTELLE By--kash poet Octelle---the syllable count structure for this verse is: 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8 rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa... the first two lines and the last two lines are identical. © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) ==============000==============

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 11:09:00 PM

    Hi, Kash DO write a poem because you need a new one up!! thanks for reading my stuff, sweet friend.

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:15:00 AM

    soupy!..:)

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:16:00 PM

    arrrgh.. why you not writing any piece, kashi.. me wondering..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Heavenly expression with a perfect rhyme scheme. Well done :)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:02:00 PM

    where are you, kashi!..hugggs

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 10:08:00 AM

    great kash.poems are really great.This one great. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:19:00 AM

    kashi.... are you in outer space?.. come home!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 8:41:00 PM

    Its such a nice thought to picture being drenched in stardust. I love the imagery and symbolism, and I wonder how you came us with such beautiful verses. Love love love

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 2:46:00 PM

    wow! Kash, I must had missed this contest.. I will look it up later tonight... a delightful and pretty poem... can I call it pretty... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 2:08:00 PM

    beep, beep, kashi bud!... have a lovely weekend!..:)

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:21:00 PM

    Kash, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 3:00:00 PM

    yo, wake up... give me some of those gems!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 8:14:00 AM

    A stellar write, Kash! I really like this! Congrats on your win! I'm fav'ng this. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:31:00 PM

    Excellent. Beautiful write. Congrats. Thanks for sharing with me. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:07:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Kash.Comely imagery

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 6:11:00 PM

    just wanted to say " hi", kashi... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 3:52:00 PM

    "wrap their pains with this bright shawl"......oh, how I love this tender write! Wonderful, Kash! Congratulations once again!

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:43:00 PM

    Ahhh!!!Congrats on your creative and unique winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 2:21:00 PM

    Thos os almost like a prayer.Very beautiful.Defimitely sprinkled in my heart-peace and serenity-Charma

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 2:11:00 PM

    Kash, what a pity there isn't a place we can all meet on these nights....not in commiseration, but in fellowship! heartfelt write!

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:47:00 AM

    You write this as if you are writing a prayer Kash, congrats on your win, super xxx

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:15:00 AM

    Nice sentiment here: "lonely hearts which love to weep/ sprinkle your dreams on them all". Congrats, Kash. Su

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 3:47:00 AM

    starry eyed am i, kashi... chunks of congrats on your greaat win in my contest... do check my blog!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 11:19:00 PM

    big congrats, my friend. Well deserved win. Soupmail.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:30:00 PM

    This is so good Kash. Congratulations

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:33:00 AM

    have a starry night, kashi... :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 8:15:00 AM

    you did this superbly, Kash, and you deserve a big score with this one. Iove it. I think some people are missing the idea of using symbolism with this form, but you got it.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 5:06:00 AM

    Been a while...since i've read your magical poetry...and this is no exception...feels so tranquil...

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 9:17:00 PM

    This is a magnificent and intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! What a delightful piece, such a gorgeous poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 1:21:00 PM

    - Thank you for warm words in your poem Kash, beautiful! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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