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Star Dusted Coffee

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Star Dusted Coffee

Sprinkled stardust in your coffee
As I watched you sit next to me
Sip and let the dust flow through
As star light flows out of you
Enhancement of your beauty
Exposing the mystery
Sprinkled stardust in your coffee
As I watched you sit next to me


Nette's
Stardust in an Octelle contest

I could not find the form on poetry soup.
First attempt at this form, hopefully got it right.
By Richard Lamoureux

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:19:00 PM
    I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT........ <3

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/19/2013 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again SKAT
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Congrats on your unique winning work..Sara

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/19/2013 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara, thanks for your thoughtful comments.
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Congrats on your win my friend. A beautiful stardust enjoyed. Loved always, bl

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/19/2013 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks BL
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:43:00 AM
    Congrats Richard, I could swear you have the eyes of a poet, and the heart of a dreamer, your a beautiful blend, I cheer you on, win some more xxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/16/2013 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This comment makes my day Rose also like the play on words (blend) / coffee. Have a great day Rose thanks for adding the sugar.
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:10:00 AM
    :-) Liked this very much. Congrats, Richard. Su

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/16/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Suzette
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 11:38:00 PM
    :) Congrats, Richard...Yes, it is good to be in such wonderful company! Glad to share this spot with you....Sweet dreams...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/16/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My pleasure Eileen , it is an honor when it is with a poet as talented as yourself. ( and as nice as well)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:02:00 PM
    hi Richard congrats love your poem Shadow x smiles

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/16/2013 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow, smiling back.
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 9:47:00 PM
    I thought of this in a sort of twisted way... I imagined the stardust being the drug ecstasy... strange that it gave me an ominous effect??? Anyhow, I really like this verse. Always, Laura

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/15/2013 6:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Intresting thought upon retreading I can see how that could fit. Thanks for commenting.
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Very very sweet..Made me yearn for a cuppa : )

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/15/2013 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Charmaine.
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 9:27:00 AM
    Passing through and read this briefly... kindly post as VERSE( as written in the rules), and repeat lines 1 and 2 in lines 7 and 8... best of luck, nice one,richard... my contest has only one entry left, go!.. :) hugggs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/14/2013 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nette you are a sweetheart.
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 7:44:00 AM
    Richard.....how beautifully sweet.....angel wings....I like that. :-D

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/14/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I found the form a bit restrictive but I think it turned out okay in the end.