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Poetess Darkly

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Poetess Darkly

The poetess walks along a darkened hallway
Listening for the answers in the night
Her heart contained behind a glass doorway

She sees her heart pulsating with white light
Pounding on the opaque glass she screams
listening for the answers in the night

Behind this door imprisoned are her dreams
Heart on a plate waiting to be devoured
pounding on the opaque glass she screams

Some people call this the witching hour
Creatures of the night begin their feast
Heart on a plate waiting to be devoured

Her heart absorbs the energy from the beasts
Creatures of the night no longer feast
The poetess walks along a darkened hallway
Her heart contained behind a glass doorway

July 12/2013

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 9:36:00 AM
    had to see this entry. i'm impressed with the style.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/20/2013 7:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Situation
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 1:56:00 AM
    really good u have captured the feelings well my dearest Poet. hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/13/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Manel.
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 12:56:00 AM
    Oh Wow......this is really awesome Rick. I really really liked this piece. ....i could almost picture this story in a movie.....Shaz

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/13/2013 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shaz.
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Hey, darkly written allright. You're so good at terzanelle Richard. Like it.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/13/2013 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Michael
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 5:18:00 PM
    Richard, this is fantastic! Very well done! Love, Kim

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/12/2013 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kim! Have a wonderful evening.
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Thank you R L., for the comment. I do enjoy Lisa, and I am happy to know that I am part of the reason she desired a contest for herself... I am smiling with her... Good luck In her contest. she will adore this poem. xox....PD

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/12/2013 7:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hope she likes it, I read some of her work to get a feel for what she might like.
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 5:01:00 PM
    Lisa C, the girl behind a glass doorway. love the way you poet-ed the poet. she is amazing.......... SKAT

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/12/2013 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks SKAT, this is one of the more intresting comments I have received, I like it.
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 4:24:00 PM
    OOH This is eerie good Richard, she will love this xxx have a great weekend xxx

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 7/14/2013 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know her. she's one of the few i keek up with.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/12/2013 4:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose, it took me a while to think of something for her as I don't know her very well.