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CREATOR'S CRACKERS

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CREATOR'S CRACKERS

                                       Creator's crackers bursting scene
                                       far distant lighting black red green
                                            uncountable numbers hang
                                         birth place we call the big bang
                                            all move in mother sky's lap
                                            stars planets asteroids map
                                      Creator's crackers bursting scene
                                      far distant lighting black red green







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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:20:00 PM

    Hi Bl, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/19/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for your wishes. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 2:19:00 PM

    congrats for your win, BL. Very cool poem.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/18/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot of thanks to you for your wishes. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:42:00 PM

    Congrats on your creative and unique winning work...Sara

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/16/2013 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot of thanks for wishing me congrats on my win, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:46:00 AM

    congrats bl on your win love xxx

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/16/2013 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for wishing me congrats on my win. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 3:45:00 AM

    colorful mood and appeal, bl... cheers to you for a fantastic win... do check my blog..:) huggs

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/16/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for inspiring me to write more for your wishes. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:31:00 PM

    Well deserved win congratulations.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/15/2013 11:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for wishing me congrats, my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:07:00 PM

    hi Bl congrats love your poem Shadow x smiles

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/15/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for wishing me congrats, my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 9:53:00 AM

    I think you are doing great imagery for this one. Must be some very interesting and colorful stars to see. and I think your form is looking great now.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/13/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for your inspiring comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 1:27:00 PM

    hi bl, was passing through and saw this briefly... nice one... kindly repeat line 1 and 2 for line 7 and 8..see contest details for definiton of octelle.. all the best!..:) huggs

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 7/12/2013 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks, actually this is first of this form. Loved always for your kind help. Always, bl