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The Oath

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The Oath

I told my mother Quran Hadith both
I’ll read everyday, it’s my oath
Timely read and write
Not quarrel fight
Allah! You do my works all easy and smooth. 


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  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:22:00 AM

    As a Limerick this is "clunky". It doesn't flow well. Also "both" doesn't rhyme with "smooth". What works does Allah do?