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  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Natasha, this was very well written. Though, I'm wondering if this would be more fitting as a Senryu? No matter. The setting was inviting and the atmosphere layered in solitude w/a touch of sadness...yet, there's a need for security & peace. Something, it seems, not everybody can appreciate, nor understand...nice work! Don't stop! :)