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Unknown Feelings

We have been friends,
  A long time now, 
I love you more each day,
  I know you have a woman 
Of your own,
So I dont let the words
  Get away.
When I see, what she does 
To you.
  It makes me want to cry,
After all the pain you've
  Been through.
I feel like I should try.

Let me just love you.
  Let me show you what 
Is right.
  Let me put my arms around you
And, give you love tonight.
  Let me show you what your 
Missing,  from the evening
  To days light.  
You are my hearts 
desire, ive waited for my entire
Life.

  A man as fine as you, 
Should not be treated, so unkind.
  My thoughts are so confused
If only you knew, what was on my mind.
  She could never feel for you,
What I harbour within, my soul,
  Your that special man to me, 
One I long to hold, 
  
Is it not that obvious,
  The ups & downs we've shared.
 The memories both, good & bad
Our hopes, dreams, and fears.
  The arguments & disagreements,
Sometimes, you see my view.
  Friendship, love & trust, 
I also see that, do you?
When we share a greeting, 
a laugh or just a smile.
  Do you ever see or feel, 
The emotions that I hide?

Let me just love you,
  Let me show you what
Is right.
  Let me put my arms around
You, and give you love tonight.
  Let me show you what your 
Missing, from the evening to
Dayslight.  
  You are my hearts desire, 
Ive waited for my entire
  Life.

A lesson that ive learned in life
"Love does not wait"  
So here it goes,  I must convey
& spill my guts, with faith.
  Risking our friendship
Is such a scarey thought.
  But living with, the what ifs
Really truly hurts.
  Now my unknow feelings,
are, finally set free.
  Vulnerable yet honest, 
Hope you take a chance on me.

Posted 7/11/13
For anne currin contest.

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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Unrequited love. Great subject and great lyrics. I know this feeling all to well as I have been on both sides. Some times the time is not right and we must wait. But time is on your side. Live and love and don't wait he will know his crime. Kilmer, always...

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 8/11/2013 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey kilmer:) thanks so much for your comment. I wrote this just as a song but like you, I can relate to being on both sides. Your right!! alot of it is timing, timing & love go hand in hand, can be 2 very fragile parts of us. Ive learned not to wait anymore not to guard this fragile heart but that took maturity & time. Your lovely!!!!~<3~ cherie
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Your lovely Gerald,,,,many thanks:) ~<3~ cherie

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 1:42:00 AM
    I'm taking a chance on you, Cherie.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Hi morgen, yes it was in one of the contest & thanks so much for your lovely comment. So glad to see you, my friend...really happy your here. I look forward to reading from you...onelove cherrybunny lol:)

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:14:00 AM
    cherry bunny is tis the winning poem they are saying? hope you win more. . . my dearest friend

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:53:00 PM
    Cherie, Anne, has nice taste ..... congrats with your Song Lyrics entry... love~ SKAT

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/22/2013 6:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi skat, thanks appreciate your comment,,, hugs:0) ~~<3 cherie
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 3:59:00 PM
    A touching bit of work here! There are a few typos here so look it over. Best of luck in the contest with this fine poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/22/2013 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi matthew thanks for pointing that out will,, make changes, and thanks for your lovely comment, appreciate it:) ~<3~cherie....
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Such painful & stunning honesty. The heart on your sleeve shines very bright.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/15/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Drake,,, thanks for your lovely & kind comment,,, really aapreciate it:0) ~<3 cherie
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:31:00 AM
    A great piece my friend (applause) and thanks for deserting me stranger :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/15/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol m ty so much, id never desert you my friend,,,, blessings always xxoo cherie~<3
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:37:00 AM
    this never missed a beat... sweet and musical.. congrats, cherie...:)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/15/2013 7:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks nette, appreciate your kind comment thankyou:0)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 6:07:00 PM
    enjoyed your winning poem, in the lyric poem contest.... always *LINDA

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/15/2013 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi linda, thanks so much:)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 8:15:00 AM
    It seems I was right! Congratulations on your win. Hugs Rick

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/14/2013 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi rick!!! Definitely were thanks so much, truly appreciate your kindness...blessings cheriex
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 8:14:00 AM
    This is really a beautiful song....congratulations on your win

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/14/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Donna, thanks so much, really appreciate your comment:) cherie...
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 8:20:00 PM
    I love the emotion you depicted in your lyrics- definitely the makings for a killer song! Well done, and congrats on your win in my contest! :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/14/2013 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much anne, I really enjoyed your lyrics contest. I appreciate your comment very much:0) thankyou....cherie~<3
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 4:44:00 AM
    - A touching poem from you Cherie - very well written! - Good luck in the contest, I hope you will win. - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/13/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much.lise,,, always appreciate your kindness & lovely comments thankyou!!! Have a great weekend to thanksxx <3 cheriex
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 2:09:00 AM
    A poem of beautifully woven words of hidden love...the futility of the "love, what if's?" Words nearly all can Identify with. D.N.Read ;{>

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/13/2013 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for your lovely comment DN...much appreciate your kindness,, blessings always Cherie:0)
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 1:52:00 AM
    a sad love song. Your feelings are sprinkled all over the reader. Nice verse. Lots of Hugs

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/13/2013 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Greetings Manel,, thanks so much for your kind comment. Really appreciate it:) onelove,,,~<3~ cheriex
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:48:00 AM
    this is truly a fantastic piece, I know Anne will love it. Well done. I wrote a song as well this morning. I guess we are both inspired today.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/12/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi rick thanks so much for, your comment, it really made my day!! Your so right inspiration, is flowing:) and your poem was awesome... :0)
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Hi Cherie, I to hope he takes on all the beauty and wonders of you.. sometimes if you don't risk, you will never know...love the poem... a wink from me to you.. ;-) LINDA

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/12/2013 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda, thanks so much for taking the time to comment. It's just a fictional write for a lyrical poem. Definitely true, have to take risk, sometimes. Appreciate your kind comment:0) ~<3 Cherie