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  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:02:00 AM
    Your words scream from the page so I guess you are not that guy. Well done Dan. I'm impressed.

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:15:00 PM
    You for sure must be a song writer. We all carry within us silent screams. And rarely are we able to express them. When we do, the men in the white jackets come.

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 4:56:00 AM
    Enjoyed this powerfully written piece of a the wonderful way you portray the emotions of hidden pain. In most cases it will implode within us--the final scream.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 1:22:00 PM
    I wonder just how many of us hold our screams in? The silent screams are probably the most deadly. Interesting and well written Dannyboy! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:12:00 PM
    swaying with pop melody, i want to sing this, dan... lively, beautiful lines!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:08:00 PM
    This is a very nicely written piece! Great work. :)