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Detach

Violet tulips
Each petal flips, another
Memory of you

©Drake J. Eszes 

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  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:17:00 PM
    Violet.... :-) Hope her memories are sweet Drake..

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/11/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wouldn't know, to be honest. :) Hi & thank you so much, Eileen.
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Nice one, Drake. Short and sweet, but with great imagery! Well done!....You might like my poem titled, "Love Bites", it also has a flower theme....Thank you so much for all of your visits. Every one of them is appreciated!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/3/2013 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks very much, Kelly! :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:59:00 PM
    Great Haiku, very difficult to employ this format and get precisely what you want, but I believe you did it! good Job! MC

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/30/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, it can be challenging when you're trying to get a point across in so few words. Thanks so much, MC!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 7:12:00 AM
    So lovely. So concise. Love from Nola

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/8/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    =D Thank you so much, Nola!
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:38:00 AM
    nice one here, i love violets, lovely read, have a blessed day, sueellen

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/7/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & Thank you so much, Sue-Ellen!!! Yes, violets are quite pretty. =)
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:35:00 AM
    nice take on this had form loved the imagery in play also thanks for your kind comment on my limerick love to do them keep up the nice work and thanks again for stopping by

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/2/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & you're welcome, Katherine! Very cool of you to stop on by! =)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:04:00 PM
    Adding this to my list of favorites- 'nough said!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    =D WOO HOO! Thank you, Anne!!!!!
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Very nice poem with strong imagery.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/24/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Christine. Thanks very much for that.
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:05:00 AM
    each petal flips............. so,,,,,,,,,,,,,,beautiful

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/23/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    =) Thank you so much, Ellie.
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:35:00 PM
    I believe this is the first haiku I've seen from you . I like it ;} Thank you for reading " Hollow Bones" I read my poems to my g- daughter because it teaches her how to read. So now and then she likes to input some ;}

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/19/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's a beautiful thing. And thank you for that, Debbie. :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 2:46:00 PM
    LOVE. Such a nice treat to see you kick butt at a different form! (Faved)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/17/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL you're totally adorable. Thank you so much, Heather. =D Butt-kicking forms EVERYDAY! You rock!
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Very nice! Haiku is such an image-loaded form, and you've done a fine job with this one... Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/16/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, it really is! I'm very happy you liked this one! :) Thanks so much, Jack!
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 1:24:00 AM
    Excellent way to use that image. I like. Very.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/16/2013 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, Michae! :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Text book Haiku... and great meaning. Very well done and true to form.... Jake

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/15/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, John! :) Thanks so much! I'm glad I got this right! =D
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 11:03:00 PM
    You are such a sweet romantic guy! :) Lovely read, Drake. Lovely haiku.....sweet

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/14/2013 12:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I try, Eileen. :) Thank you so much!!!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:01:00 PM
    Excellent haiku enjoyed. How memory acts you have shown clearly with a very few words. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/12/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, the power of memories and how we value them. Thanks so much, BL!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Have a great day Drake. Thanks for your kind comment Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/12/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's Friday! I sure plan to! :) You have an awesome day too!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Great imagery in this haiku, Drake. I like... David

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/12/2013 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey, David! :) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:36:00 AM
    Beautiful!! Accurate and perfect description of both love and flowers. Seems we were both in a "flower" writing mood yesterday. Thank you for stopping by "In Bloom"-- your encouragement is always appreciated!! Our writers group, who meet once a month, want us to write on the title "Lazy Daisy Days" (light verse) for next month-- Hmmm.. not too great on 'light verse', but will see what comes out.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/12/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Kim! :) Yes, I noticed that! That was pretty coincidental! Or, was it?? lol But, thank you so much for that. "Lazy Daisy Days", interesting. Let me know how that turns out. I'd like to see the end result! =)
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 11:48:00 PM
    awesome haiku, Drake. The title goes so well with it. "petal" Luv, Andrea

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/12/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, Andrea! And, yes, "petal". =) Didn't even notice that...geez. Shame on me!
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