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Detach

Violet tulips
Each petal flips, another
Memory of you

©Drake J. Eszes 

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  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Violet.... :-) Hope her memories are sweet Drake..

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/11/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wouldn't know, to be honest. :) Hi & thank you so much, Eileen.
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 8:52:00 PM

    Nice one, Drake. Short and sweet, but with great imagery! Well done!....You might like my poem titled, "Love Bites", it also has a flower theme....Thank you so much for all of your visits. Every one of them is appreciated!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 9/3/2013 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much, Kelly! :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Great Haiku, very difficult to employ this format and get precisely what you want, but I believe you did it! good Job! MC

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/30/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it can be challenging when you're trying to get a point across in so few words. Thanks so much, MC!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 7:12:00 AM

    So lovely. So concise. Love from Nola

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/8/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =D Thank you so much, Nola!
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:51:00 AM

    I really love this sweet haiku...

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/8/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for that! I kinda like it too. ;-)
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:38:00 AM

    nice one here, i love violets, lovely read, have a blessed day, sueellen

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/7/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi & Thank you so much, Sue-Ellen!!! Yes, violets are quite pretty. =)
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:35:00 AM

    nice take on this had form loved the imagery in play also thanks for your kind comment on my limerick love to do them keep up the nice work and thanks again for stopping by

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 8/2/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi & you're welcome, Katherine! Very cool of you to stop on by! =)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:04:00 PM

    Adding this to my list of favorites- 'nough said!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/26/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =D WOO HOO! Thank you, Anne!!!!!
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 5:30:00 AM

    Very nice poem with strong imagery.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/24/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Christine. Thanks very much for that.
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:05:00 AM

    each petal flips............. so,,,,,,,,,,,,,,beautiful

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/23/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =) Thank you so much, Ellie.
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:35:00 PM

    I believe this is the first haiku I've seen from you . I like it ;} Thank you for reading " Hollow Bones" I read my poems to my g- daughter because it teaches her how to read. So now and then she likes to input some ;}

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/19/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's a beautiful thing. And thank you for that, Debbie. :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 2:46:00 PM

    LOVE. Such a nice treat to see you kick butt at a different form! (Faved)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/17/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL you're totally adorable. Thank you so much, Heather. =D Butt-kicking forms EVERYDAY! You rock!
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Very nice! Haiku is such an image-loaded form, and you've done a fine job with this one... Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/16/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it really is! I'm very happy you liked this one! :) Thanks so much, Jack!
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 1:24:00 AM

    Excellent way to use that image. I like. Very.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/16/2013 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Michae! :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Text book Haiku... and great meaning. Very well done and true to form.... Jake

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/15/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, John! :) Thanks so much! I'm glad I got this right! =D
  1. Date: 7/13/2013 11:03:00 PM

    You are such a sweet romantic guy! :) Lovely read, Drake. Lovely haiku.....sweet

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/14/2013 12:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I try, Eileen. :) Thank you so much!!!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:01:00 PM

    Excellent haiku enjoyed. How memory acts you have shown clearly with a very few words. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/12/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, the power of memories and how we value them. Thanks so much, BL!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 8:13:00 AM

    Have a great day Drake. Thanks for your kind comment Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/12/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's Friday! I sure plan to! :) You have an awesome day too!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 5:55:00 AM

    Great imagery in this haiku, Drake. I like... David

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/12/2013 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, David! :) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:36:00 AM

    Beautiful!! Accurate and perfect description of both love and flowers. Seems we were both in a "flower" writing mood yesterday. Thank you for stopping by "In Bloom"-- your encouragement is always appreciated!! Our writers group, who meet once a month, want us to write on the title "Lazy Daisy Days" (light verse) for next month-- Hmmm.. not too great on 'light verse', but will see what comes out.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/12/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Kim! :) Yes, I noticed that! That was pretty coincidental! Or, was it?? lol But, thank you so much for that. "Lazy Daisy Days", interesting. Let me know how that turns out. I'd like to see the end result! =)
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 11:48:00 PM

    awesome haiku, Drake. The title goes so well with it. "petal" Luv, Andrea

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/12/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Andrea! And, yes, "petal". =) Didn't even notice that...geez. Shame on me!
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 10:25:00 PM

    hello Drake, i know this detached feeling pretty well... deep, xox...PD

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/12/2013 12:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hola, Linda! As do I...thanks very much for stopping by here!
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 9:31:00 PM

    I love haikus and this is why! It takes a very special poet to put so much in so little. Bravo, Drake!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/12/2013 12:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I don't write Haikus too often, but today was a good day for one. :) Change things up a bit. Very awesome of you to stop by here, Toshia! =)
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 6:37:00 PM

    Awe...so much said in so few words. Beautiful expression of the heart's yearnings. hugs, Catie :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 6:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOO HOO! Hey there! :) Thank you so much, Catie!
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 5:01:00 PM

    Beautiful! Betty

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey there, Betty!!! Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 4:24:00 PM

    captured well Drake love it Shadow x smiles

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey there! Hi & thank you, Shadow!!! =D
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:35:00 PM

    I love flowers..and tulips are a definite beauty..Somehow this haiku reminds me of a dong i used to sing when i was very young ,about Tulips from Amstetdam.Everytime I sang it I used to close my eyes and imagine myself in s large field of tulips..Somehow I can relate to tulips and the memory even if in different ways from yours.I guess violet tulips represent royalty and if in gardens -its royalty,health and passion..I hope you ll find them all..not in a memory but for a lifetime.Lovely imagery

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha! It's ok. :) I knew what you meant. Your memory sounds very nice. I'm pretty sure I'll find them. :) Thanks so much for coming by here, Charmaine!
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/11/2013 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Song..not domg : ) I must be sleepy..sorry
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 2:57:00 PM

    ohhh, may i order bunches of this kind of lovin'?... you make me swoon, drake... special!.:) huggs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You absolutely may! =) Thank you so much, Nette!
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 11:10:00 AM

    I fell in love with this poem of yours. The imagery is so touching. Thanks Drake for always keeping me lifted pertaining to my poetry. Have yourself a wonderful day. Hugs and love, Gail

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, hey Gail!!! =D I'm so happy you liked this! And you're so welcome! We need more uplifting here in PS. Keep taking that lead! Thank you so much for coming by here! It means so much!
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 11:03:00 AM

    I have not written a Haiku before but after reading this one I'm inspired to write one!! Your writing is superb Drake! More power to you! XX

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh and let me know when that Haiku is up! I'd love to see it.
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/11/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, Varsha!!! :) You came by here! Awesome! That's really cool to hear! I only started dabbling in Haikus back in 2010. It was awesome to get a hold of this style. It's a nice change of pace from my usual Free-Verse or Prose banter. =D Thank you so much for coming here!
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