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Tanka:

Michael Dom Avatar Michael Dom - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Tanka: which was written by poet Michael Dom. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tanka:

Your face unwrinkles
You are imponderable
In your vast silence
In your deep, dark blue embrace
Who dares breach your salty keep?

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  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:10:00 AM
    very interesting words used here. What a great personification of ocean.

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom
    Date: 4/20/2014 10:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ta Andrea. :-)
  1. Date: 3/30/2014 12:41:00 AM
    I find this to be a strong tanka for several reasons, especially because I am able to interpret it in different ways .... as the ocean personified, as different people and characters. Michael, I am pleased to meet your acquaintance -- well, poetically and as online digital representations of ourselves, at least. You obviously don't have to answer this question, but I am curious to know if this was your first attempt at writing tanka?

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom
    Date: 3/30/2014 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Chris, pleased to 'meet' you too. This tanka was 'my first', a mutation of several threads I was working on, which I painstakingly took apart and reconnected until somehow these pieces came together. It was the first tanka I wrote which I thought had real value in the form. Cheers&thanks
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:48:00 AM
    DAMN! Fantastic & thought-provoking. Love how this flowed!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Beautiful as the secretive sea who hosts the oyster and the shell fish, lovely Dom, xxx

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom
    Date: 7/14/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-)