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Only in his arms shall I

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Below is the poem entitled Only in his arms shall I which was written by poet Anoucheka Gangabissoon. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Only in his arms shall I

When closed are mine eyes
I can see only those butterflies
Surrounding me and my prince
Ouch, a wake up back does wince!

A great man, all white in beard
All acclaimed and well feared
He speaks with the sound of thunder
And glares at the sight of blunder

Should you ever wonder
Who is mine own wonder
Why? He is in my heart
Kept as a secret sweetheart

That one great man, so well known
For him, I shall go to those ways still unknown
Someone I cannot name
For so great is his fame

Such a man do I admire
As my own identical peer
Such a man I shall dance with
Even if to have a dance shall have me in grieve

A tango, a waltz or even a slow
Whichever style the melody will flow
In him I shall lose my stricture
And bear with his own pleasure!

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:54:00 AM

    I sent you a soup mail reply

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Hi Anna (May I call you that?) Thanks for the lovely comment! To find soup mail, go to the poet's picture, beside that on the right it will say 'Written by'_ _ _directly beside THAT you will see an envelope with a steaming cup of coffee...That's soup mail...Next to that, (only if the poet is a premium member) you will see a square box which is the poet's latest blog (If the poet has posted one) You can find all the blogs on the home page where you can leave comments on the ones that interest you...Thanks again for the comment - Tim

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 8:29:00 AM

    Beautifully written love poem, Anoucheka...I especially like the title, a lovely introduction to the rest of the verse...Congratulations and I forward to reading more - Tim

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 7/18/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thks........Sorry i can't find soup mail........but i posted a comment to one of your poems
    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson Date: 7/18/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PS: I'm trying to figure out your country of origin by your name...Anouchecka sounds Russian of Eastern European and your last name, I have no idea...Would you mind sending me a Soup Mail to let me know?...I am very curious!...Thanks - Tim
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 6:27:00 PM

    A lovely write, Anoucheka! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 7/18/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thks you
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:25:00 PM

    Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 7/18/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thk you Linda :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 4:17:00 PM

    A G.,Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 7/18/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thks SKAT :)