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The Feel of Dawn

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The Feel of Dawn

You run with the breeze
naked spirit oh so free,
joyous tide of life
your smile I catch in the wind
with every single sunrise.

© Harry J Horsman 2013  

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 11:51:00 PM

    I sure am glad I read this after reading "the Face of Dawn"-- this is truly beautiful as well, loving how this one is so descriptive and alive- I could picture this perfectly. This was such a pleasure to read, and smiles on my face...

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:23:00 AM

    This one reminded me to be thankful for each new day-- a fresh start. Thank-you for that.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 1:42:00 PM

    You run with the breeze tanka with the lines 4 and 5 are heartfelt romantic. I like it. I like it a lot. Wonderful. Robert Henry Poulin

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 1:37:00 AM

    Aha! Harry, this is one of your best tanka to date(my subjective opinion that I'd like to believe holds some objective truth). Yes, this tanka is exemplary. P.S. -- I hope you are doing well.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 12:05:00 AM

    returning to this gorgeous poem to say, missing you!

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:09:00 PM

    Every time I read this form from you, you nail it! So impressive! I have tried the form before and never felt I succeeded haha. Well done, you're a super Souper! :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:57:00 PM

    This definitely goes to my favourites.It tickles my romantic side..soo beautiful

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:48:00 PM

    Reminds me of D.H Lawrence's freedom. Man can't be more free for expression. Love your comparison because it checks the type of freedom to be expressed by man. Love the motif of freedom. Greatly penned Harry. Love. Angel

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 2:01:00 PM

    Nothing like catching a naked runner before the sun rises. By the end of the week you must be exhausted.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Lovely Harry! I love two last line they are gorgeous :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:01:00 PM

    Beauteous! Words of the heart.

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 1:23:00 PM

    Beautiful images, tender tanka

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 10:27:00 AM

    What a beautiful tanka...Just beautiful Harry

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Harry this is a fabulous tanka. I love the second line. You've created a care-free dawn. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 2:28:00 PM

    I can feel the cool touch of dawn with this wonderful poem! Harry! jimbo

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:32:00 PM

    you bring me directly into the beauty of dawn's moment.. what a fine work, harry..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Again an excellent beauty feeling adorned with beautiful words. A nice creation. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:39:00 AM

    Ahh me Harry...What a beauty this is!...You have captured the very essence of morning here...'naked spirit oh so free'...'your smile I catch in the wind'...WOW

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 7:58:00 PM

    Who could not smile upon reading this one!??

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Harry, I like this second one even better. One of your very best tanka poems. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 2:10:00 PM

    You're so good at nailing this form every single time! I love it!

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 12:52:00 PM

    Great one to express morn's good feelings or one to describe a person maybe..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Sara...I am glad that you chose mine to read..Sara

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 12:44:00 PM

    Another great one, Harry... keep it up... Terry

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 12:31:00 PM

    Yes enjoy every day.....we learn this more the older we get..anyway I sure do...great words Harry....thanks

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 11:51:00 AM

    This is very beautiful Harry. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 10:56:00 AM

    - Harry, each line gives me a pleasure - Thank you. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 9:38:00 AM

    Love your scenery you penned here. I love nature and this is just beautiful Harry. Thanks for stopping by my poetry today. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 9:17:00 AM

    a write that puts a smile on my face, a good write, enjoyed this one, LUV SKAT

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Hi Harry....You're at it again! Making magic....loved this. :) Hugs

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 3:36:00 AM

    Lovely words Harry ....Seren